My music video and website were reviewed several times, both during and after the production process. I was given lots of feedback from my teachers to help me improve the products before the deadline.
My music video
WWW: The video looks professional and fits well into the pop genre
The mise-en-scene is amazing and makes clear reference to the 60s
There are a good variety of shots
Good pace which fits to the music well
The grade is good and signifies the change in time
EBI: The opening narrative shots need to anchor the story more
Some sections were particularly 'performance heavy' where an audience might expect to see narrative
Add the name of my artist and the title of the song at the start
Add a link to the website at the end
Add more scenes from the record shop as the location looked really good on camera
Below, you can see the improvements that I made after receiving that feedback.
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| Adding the name of the track |
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| Adding a link to website |
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| Changing the opening shots to anchor the story more |
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| Adding extra scenes from the record shop |
My website
WWW: There is lots of interactive elements
The pictures anchor the star identity of the artist
The extra audio visual content is very entertaining and original
We were also given a list of snags that needed to be fixed before the deadline:
HOMEPAGE
Tour section is all over the place
‘Watch now’ button doesn’t got to anywhere
Gallery section – slider transitions too quickly
When click ‘view now’ the gallery doesn’t show
Name the ‘Merch’ section
‘Sale’ button doesn’t work
Fanbase needs to be prominent on website there is only one reference – i.e. b-gang etc.
Check image captions as they have the original image names
Facebook at bottom leads to Wix Facebook
Menu bar needs to scroll with page or have a button to
bring you to top in each section (Can’t get back to start or to another
section)
Original crowd image?
LINKED PAGE
No menu bar
News summary needs more mode of address to make it personal
Check grammar in ‘latest news’ section
‘Read More’ buttons don’t work on any section
Make the sections the same size
Elle cover isn’t industry standard – too simple
Again, I have embedded the improvements that I made after receiving my feedback
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| Improving my tour section and making it more clear |
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| Adding a menu bar to the News page |
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| Making the mode of address more personal on my news page |
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| Adding a 'back to top' button |
I am very grateful for the teachers feedback as it has been crucial in making my project the best it can possibly be.
I also received lots of feedback on my music video from my peers and the target audience. Everyone seemed to love and understand the narrative, they liked the upbeat nature of the song and they enjoyed the variety of shots. Lots of people said it looked high quality and professional which I am very pleased about.
Working on this project has been an absolute pleasure. I have learnt so much about pre-production planning, filming, editing and performing! It has been so much fun watching my ideas come to life. It has taken lots hard-work, but it has been an experience that I will never forget.
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